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1500 years
Contributed by
Castinova
on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 03:48:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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1500 years
lying here in agony
cant anyone see me?
Crying out noislessly
my eyes are open but I cant
see.
I force myself to breathe.
The world is spinning but I
cant move
the doors are open
but still I cant get
through.
I need someone to lift me up
into the sun once more.
Darkness crawls and
demons fly all
around me.
Wheres my angels
my hopes
my light?
Why have they left me?
Im crying out but no one hears
whats happening to me?
I rip my heart out just to know I bleed.
Colors are fadded
no one can see me
no one can hear me scream!
Copyright ©
Castinova
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2006-03-14 15:48:34]
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Re: 1500 years
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 09:13:35 PM AEST
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i saw your german version, and i wondered what it was about..wow though, beautifully written. painful, but i'm guessing that's how it was meant to be. loved it.
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Re: 1500 years
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by StephaniePaige on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 12:07:53 PM AEST
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I love this, I really do. It's very well written, and I can feel the emotion while reading it.
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