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Daughter
Contributed by
Sinned
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Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:36:33 PM in AEST
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I watched you grow Smiles and tears Rosy cheeks Painted toes Paper hearts Cabbage patch kids To Barbi dolls Teen years a voice parched Boys came boys went Seemed you knew everthing All answers you had within Days I had anger pent Smiles lingered But a while Days father doesn't understand Our tears mingled Mine for you yours because of me What does a father know Only what he thinks is true A daughter is fear Knowing all answers A daughter is love Held in smiles and tears Then a day and daughter is gone From toddler to high heels A daughter is woman Love and pride the new song Over a long while Father and daughter A bond not to be broken Forgotten any tears With love father smiles
To Mary Ann Sinned
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Sinned
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Re: Daughter
(User Rating: 1 ) by freespirit on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 10:07:01 PM AEST (User
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nice poem filled with a lot of love well done
and so true good write
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Re: Daughter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 10:43:23 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful dedication to a daughter from a father whose heart is filled with the most exquisite and tender love.
Profoundly moving!
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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Re: Daughter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 03:46:47 PM AEST (User
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This is beautiful. I only have sons, so I could only relate to your poem by thinking of me as a daughter growing up, and your poem gave me memories of me growing up from a small little barbie doll person to big bears on a stick in the store. I loved your poem. lol, my mother and I made cabbage patch dolls for my sons lol. Certificate of birth too. The games and toys they had as a child they still have, all except for a few dolls that I keep on my sofa. lol. The Lord gave me two wonderful daughter-in-laws. And two granddaughters, I watch them as they grow, and see their daddy's tears and smiles.
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Re: Daughter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:54:42 PM AEST (User
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beautifully written , a great dedication to a special someone who is dear to you. loved it |
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Re: Daughter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 09:18:31 PM AEST (User
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This is a very beautiful poem, it's so full of love.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Daughter
(User Rating: 1 ) by stew777 on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 04:14:21 AM AEST (User
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Words From The Heart Here, Beautiful
Words, Wonderful Words of Love and
emotion brought together in this
Fantastic tribute to a daughter.
Thanks for sharing this special poem with
us.
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Re: Daughter
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 12:13:51 PM AEST (User
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This was very beautiful!! I enjoyed reading it. It was full of love. Beautiful....
take care
christina |
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