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Contributed by
Mild_Tempest
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Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 09:54:13 PM in AEST
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There are things when Im alone,
That scare not only me,
Things that lurk behind every shadow,
Things that you cant see.
When I feel a chilly breath,
Catch a glimpse of a corpse,
Whenever I try to scream,
My throat just goes hoarse.
Theres evil behind each wall,
Each evil is my obsession,
Each evil I cant escape,
And the evil is my passion.
I dont quite understand,
This utter change of heart,
Evil is like the love I seek,
Evil is the forbidden art.
To me the dark is home,
The only place I cant be seen,
And the music to my ears,
It's the sounds of children screams.
No no, this cant be,
Am I turning into evil itself,
Or am I seeking something else.
Theres such thrill in the dark,
How perfect a raven blends with the night,
In the dark nothing goes wrong,
Nothing to fear but the light.
So this is what Ive become,
A creature in the dark,
A nightmare that lurks within,
An eternitys journey Ive embarked.
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Mild_Tempest
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2006-03-14 21:54:13]
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Re: Art
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 11:01:52 AM AEST
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This is amazing.. I think that you should have put this under dark poetry. The way that you wrote this poem made it flow smoothly and when i read the first few lines it is like i had to read it. this was really really good..
thanks for the comment on my poem. I appreciate it..
take care
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:42:20 AM AEST
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wow, this is exceptional. I loved it, nice dark poetry, written so perfectly. You are good, keep writing, blows me a way. very very full of images, places the reader right where the character is. Good job..
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