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Dead Now
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 12:30:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm dead now and I really dont care
I'm crying but the tears arent there
My wrists are bleeding and the sins are gone
I see the darkness so it wont be long
Carry me away with gashes so deep
Cant even wait for this endless sleep
Pain so disturbing that I grab the knife
Slicing deep to quickly end my life
Blood so dark I cant get enough
This is my only true love
Eyes closed I'm losing more blood
This time my eyes will always keep shut
Glad I'm dead and away from the pain
Its amazing how long Ive kept it in vein
Copyright ©
lonely_boy
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2006-03-15 00:30:05]
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Re: Dead Now
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 12:33:47 AM AEST
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| sent chills down my spine.....great though |
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Re: Dead Now
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by Asoftmelody on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 01:02:10 AM AEST
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| Very expressive and personal, I like your style. |
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Re: Dead Now
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by -why_not_let_me_live- on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:02:51 AM AEST
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| strong write, poems are always written better ehrn the poet has acctuali fet the feelings there writing about and sadly i think you have |
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