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CAPACIOUS
Contributed by
boobiepeach
on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:38:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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WITH WIDE IN MIND BUT LITTLE KNOWN
ABSCURE AND SECRET MIND HAS SHOWN
LEAVE WITH ME AND OFFENSE BRING
RAGE OF ROOMY HOLLOW HEART STING
CAPACIOUS WAS THE VAST INSIDE
WHERE UNKNOWINGLY I USED TO HIDE
DARK AND DEEP THE BROAD TOO NEAR
NEVER EXPANSIVE REFLECTION IN MIRROR
GENEROUS WITH TALL BLUE BORDERS
FAINT ECHOING OF HEARTS SLOW MOTERS
ROOMY WITH ROOM TO FILL
A STRUGLE TO LET BE AND HARDER TO KILL
Copyright ©
boobiepeach
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2006-03-15 14:38:53]
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Re: CAPACIOUS
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 03:07:34 PM AEST
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| a good wite with a good flow |
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Re: CAPACIOUS
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by Castinova on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 03:31:28 PM AEST
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| good write~ |
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Re: CAPACIOUS
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:38:08 PM AEST
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| nicely done |
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Re: CAPACIOUS
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 06:41:13 PM AEST
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I was pleasantly thrilled with this work. Though I have one slight criticism. I found it (at first) hard to read because of the ALL CAPS form. Though, this has nothing to do with the poem itself, if I were not a patient reader I may not have tried to looked past this, and look into the poem itself.
Other than that, the poem itself is captivating, and flows great. A very good job!
WELL DONE!
- SCM |
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Re: CAPACIOUS
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:05:07 PM AEST
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| a very grip'n write, awesome job! |
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Re: CAPACIOUS
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by JGB on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 06:54:17 PM AEST
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| Like it! Keep it up. |
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Re: CAPACIOUS
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 04:32:55 AM AEST
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Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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