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Contributed by
whiteleo1984
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Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 04:52:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your eyes show a heartache that only a few have felt Your actions show a grace that only a few will know Your smile cheers the soul of those around you Your attitude shows a determination that only a few will realize Your heart was broken, this I know cause your eyes told me so but I kno that life will move on and your heart's love will once again begin it's song maybe tomorrow or even today love will once again be coming yur way and I hope and pray that you will notice that someday you remind me of myself in the past of those days that I thought will always last but I began to realize something inside and I began to cry you touched my heart with your tears and I wanted to help you relieve your fears but am I able? am I willing? the answer is always yes why is that I will never know but I will get you to the next show and you will glide and begin to dance and your soul will start it's chant that the way I see you today and I hope you will understand that in some way you have more inside that you ever knew if you only realize what I see in you
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by chaos78 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:13:34 PM AEST (User
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nice sounds like u care for this person a lot |
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:25:23 PM AEST (User
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well done |
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Amazon on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:54:04 PM AEST (User
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i love this poem it makes me think of one of my friends who is always there for me, you being there for this person plrobably means more to them then they will ever let you know i hope this girl reads it and realises how much you care and how valuable you are in her life |
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alison on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 01:14:06 PM AEST (User
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you no, i bet that the girl u r take'n bout feels very blessed to have someone like u care bout her! |
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