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This Is Her Life
Contributed by
vermilion
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Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 06:52:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Incredible shaking
Jaw firm and still
Descending and quaking
Searching for the pills
Eyes that are tearing
Hands try to catch
Heart always fearing
Fingers that snatch
Breaths sometimes gasping
Catching and sighing
Hands that are grasping
Eyes always crying
Fingers are folding
Blade of the knife
Hands that are holding
This is her life
Incredible stillness
Shaking all gone
Containers pill-less
Decision all wrong
Eyes that are drying
Fists wiping away
Mind always trying
For just one more day
Breaths become steady
Knife falls to ground
Girl never ready
To disturb with sound
Limbs helping stand
So nobody knows
Handle and hand
Door slams with its close
Copyright ©
vermilion
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2006-03-16 06:52:38]
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Re: This Is Her Life
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by ilovelillbj on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:15:14 AM AEST
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| wow , i think thats a really good poem. i neither self harm or agree with it but the feeling an poignancy of this poem is undeniable. really good! |
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Re: This Is Her Life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 11:14:27 AM AEST
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| know exactly how you feel. Wonderful write. |
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Re: This Is Her Life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 01:03:10 PM AEST
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| You've amazed me once again. |
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Re: This Is Her Life
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 04:44:48 PM AEST
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| I've felt this a lot. This is so surreal. I love it! it's beautiful and dark. Wonderful write! |
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Re: This Is Her Life
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by no_one on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 07:09:54 PM AEST
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| this poem was awesome. i feel that way sometimes in my life, but it's never worked. but i thatnk God for that. this is an awesome poem! whoever wrote this should be published in a book or something! NO LIE!!! |
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Re: This Is Her Life
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by whiteleo1984 on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:59:42 PM AEST
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| this is a really good write, i dont agree with it even tho i used to harm myself... but i understand |
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Re: This Is Her Life
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by girlg0newrong on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 01:40:59 AM AEST
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all to familiar to me. Great stuff.
-kinzi |
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