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Sound and Southern Skies
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 09:27:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Walked into a cafe
wallowed wildly
across bar and sign
willed black eyed girl
bring coffee cream
curtain night with
nicotine.
Eased slowly into silver
blue and gold
twisted spoon
spoke serried
southern speech
spread thin
by city roads.
Sit love, and hear my story
silk and bone
scraped suddenly
stretched singly
over words and stone.
Sit love, and let my story
ease sleep
etch dream with dream
in dreams of dirt
and deep.
Walked willfully away
walked screaming out there names
walked lonely open road.
Walked lonely open road
climbed mountain breast
and bread
slept shivering cold alone
spoke sound and southern sky
slit open by the sun.
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iodinelove
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2006-03-16 09:27:43]
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Re: Sound and Southern Skies
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:40:11 AM AEST
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Compelling! I am usually not a fan of this form. The inital mentioned subject not repeated and missing connected words. But with the correct skill and good writer it can be pulled off. I would say you pulled it off well.
Great job!
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