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Until Her Final Call
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 12:01:06 PM in AEST
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The winds blowing whipping skin
Hair flying wildly around
Her garments torn from war
But no sense of sorrow to be found
Bruised her heart sorely broke
Tattered her memories
But through the storm she strides
For hope of tomorrow she sees
A soul of light she will move
Ahead through darkest night
Not stopping to cry out
And lament her pitiful plight
Hope ever springs eternal
From the depth of her
Others are surprised
For from joy she does not deter
Love for others she bestows
Helping hand extends
Always picking others up
Always making amends
So through the storm she fights
Giving life her all
Taking what destiny offers
Until her final call
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NoSaint
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Re: Until Her Final Call
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by Lin54 on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 12:08:33 PM AEST
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This is an enjoyable read--such encouragement to those who would rather give up. May we be like this woman in your poem who will never give up--until her final call--but will continue to lift others up!
WOW!
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Re: Until Her Final Call
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by shelby on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 12:24:15 PM AEST
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Oh Shari the beauty of this brought tears to my eyes.
Michelle |
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Re: Until Her Final Call
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 01:16:37 PM AEST
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| Very powerful write. Such deep emotion.....Mike |
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Re: Until Her Final Call
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 01:37:33 PM AEST
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| Shari, this is a super write, on the wonderful strong will of a woman. Is this any chance a remnant of you? Well written Shari and inspiring. Thanks for sharing. Peace and love, Laura |
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Re: Until Her Final Call
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by chaos78 on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 02:12:31 PM AEST
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| this brought tears to my eyes i hope i can be that strong |
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Re: Until Her Final Call
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by thesinner on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 04:35:17 PM AEST
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| Very inspiring. |
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Re: Until Her Final Call
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 07:47:19 PM AEST
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Ahhh the Lady speaks of herself!!
Well done, my friend....
Hugs
Jenni |
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