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Hangdog Cain
Contributed by
ScreenSaver77
on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 05:02:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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In the reflection of my mortal sword
Behind the cold hearted steel
A netherworld awaits my soul
My shield the only rescue in my hope to find the Promised Land
Bathing naked in his undeserving blood
As I fed the blade into the heart of his utopian soil
My dirty hands cannot be undone
Time only ticks clockwise
Im Houdini chained with no escape
Destined for the day of reckoning
As I watched the tiny creatures eating on his corpse
What have I done??
I deserve the worst conceivable penance, but instead
You embrace me with your undeserving grace
Seventy and sevenfold youve set me free
Thank you, I am truly blessed
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ScreenSaver77
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2006-03-16 17:02:33]
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Re: Hangdog Cain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 05:26:23 PM AEST
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I'm not religious but speaking 4 my self you can beleive this comment to be sincere. A lovely write and most noble in it's humility. Talk about straight from the heart. It's more honest than alot i've read on here. nice presentation.
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Re: Hangdog Cain
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by thesinner on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 08:31:12 PM AEST
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| very well done.Very powerful. |
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Re: Hangdog Cain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st July 2007 @ 12:10:14 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. |
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