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Cinderella story
Contributed by
poetic_influence
on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 06:04:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Can't express my mind
Because you always leave me speachless
A feeling so one of a kind
I guess words....there sorta needless
This look on my face
Should say it all
Not a second to waste
So catch me if I fall
Look into my eyes
Go with the flow
So happy I could cry
Now that you finally know
Look at me ...I'm sweating
Oh ...so foolish I must look
The mood is setting
My hearts an open book
Here it goes...The kiss that shakespear would admire
So magical
Like an intense fire
So there it was...
I hope I dont look stupid
I know its too soon to be love
And I dont know what made me do it
But I guess its all done
Now I know how it feels
To kiss "The one"
It felt so real
But now I must go
I'll put back on my glass slipper for midnight has struck
My name you will wonder
But you will have no luck
Your heart will be torn assunder
So just call me the modern Cinderella
Who craved that first kiss
From such a remarkable fella
That kiss........I will forever miss
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Re: Cinderella story
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by DarkFaerie on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 09:03:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful write.
The kiss that shakespear would admire
So magical
Like an intense fire
So there it was...
Wonderful images. : ) |
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Re: Cinderella story
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by BabyBEL on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 10:20:04 AM AEST
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| Good job! |
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