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Casual Casualties
Contributed by
twick
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Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 09:40:52 PM in AEST
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senseless words,
pointless chatter,
useless banter,
yet I gather
the harsh insult hidden underneath
you don't have to sugar coat it for me
I understand if it's found wanting
the process is sometimes truly exhausting
but I try
I really try
the heart is there everytime.
In fact I don't quite understand
your terminology
it leaves me wondering
is it good or bad
it's strange that it feels so sad
because you have wounded me
quite unexpectedly.
And I wonder your goal
what was it you were hoping
that I would stop
give up
put down the pen?
Well, I'll let you in
on a secret
I write in the moment
enjoy where it's going
because I get to be a different me
one removed but still connected to everything.
This is my itch and I do my best to satisfy it
A whim?
you wish
So be careful next time when you load the canon
that is your mouth
It's not that I'm sensitive
but maybe you didn't realize I do this in complete seriousness.
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-03-16 21:40:52]
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Re: Casual Casualties
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by UnmovedMover on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:02:15 PM AEST
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| That is a nice analogy. Well writen and nice message. |
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Re: Casual Casualties
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by eggflipper on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 11:31:04 PM AEST
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Bravo.
Stand up and be counted. |
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