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You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows
Contributed by
eggflipper
on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The sun set ...
like that man wrote.
The sky was ...
like that woman wrote.
Words describe,
prescribe,
illustrate,
illuminate,
words that glorify,
demonize,
patronize,
canonize
in a plastic reality.
Changing,
alternating,
evolving,
regressing,
still was,
still differently the same.
Sometimes the point is lost
in the artwork.
The sun set and night came.
You are beautiful even in the reflections
of our windows.
Copyright ©
eggflipper
... [
2006-03-16 22:37:23]
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Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows
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by Jane_Doe on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:46:41 PM AEST
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| I really liked this a lot. Your words were so emotional and so lovely and the feelings expressed are so real. Great write. |
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Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows
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by Alison on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 11:57:21 PM AEST
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| its deep. great write! |
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Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows
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by thesinner on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:28:44 AM AEST
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| I am always moved by your writes, this is no different. |
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Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows
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by shelby on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:36:32 AM AEST
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you always write with great intensity making one think. your creative side is fresh and exciting.
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Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 11:09:39 AM AEST
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You have captured the point very well.... Love your style......
Jenni |
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Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows
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by whiteleo1984 on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:26:43 PM AEST
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| i liked it |
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