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Still waiting...
Contributed by
Nightingale
on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 01:21:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Every minute I hope to get a message from you
Each time my cell phone beeps, I hold my breath,
Wanting it to be you
But with each passing minute, the distance between us grows
And I fear to have lost you forever...
Copyright ©
Nightingale
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2006-03-17 13:21:53]
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Re: Still waiting...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 01:31:56 PM AEST
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| Wow very powerful in just a few lines. You have summoned up exactly how i feel w/this write. Hope things get better for you. Good luck. Thanks for writing this |
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Re: Still waiting...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 01:40:39 PM AEST
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| Many times have I felt these words. Great write....mike |
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Re: Still waiting...
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by je2ica3 on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 06:27:23 PM AEST
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| that feeling usually sucks...great write you really put the feelings alot of people have in perspective nice job |
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Re: Still waiting...
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 03:11:34 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this.It almost feels like ones waiting forever.Great work!Keep it up. |
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