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Lost and Found - Track 3 - Father
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 08:45:02 PM in AEST
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Slide left Lousiana
And all that he took
With him on his journey
His guitar and The Book
A new start awaited
Beyond all he had known
He read as he played
While he searched for a home
One night in the darkness
The words became clear
This type of surrender
He did not have to fear
He looked to the sky
Hoping someone would hear
( release date for track 4, Out Of The Dark, March 25th, 2006 )
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 3 - Father
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 11:06:49 PM AEST
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Wow...amazing write
Shari |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 3 - Father
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:54:34 PM AEST
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Awww...This one seems very sad...
I really can't imagine Slide looking like that, btw. lol.
Seriously, I like this. I don't think it is the best one out of them so far, the first orange part was a little awkward I found, but the poem was still very good. The blue parts are my favourites, though.
Good write, hun.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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