|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
End Drawing Near
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 07:20:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Softly he whispers words of deceit
Roses he lays at the ladies feet
Time alone will show his true tone
The voice he uses when he is alone
Tortured is he for through the years
He has left hundred of ladies in tears
No longer truthful he just wants to feed
Blood now is his only need
Death or worse is his offer now
After finished he takes a bow
Maybe they will be heaven sent
Or immortal and hell bent
Sadly she listens to his words
A spike to be used as her sword
Avenging the death of a sister dear
Will it be her or his end drawing near?
Copyright ©
NoSaint
... [
2006-03-19 07:20:09]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: End Drawing Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 07:47:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hmm well done...but I sense some strong underlying tones.....
Hope all is well..
Hugs
Jenni |
|
|
Re: End Drawing Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 09:21:19 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Shari, unfortunately there has to be writes like this. Well penned....Mike |
|
|
Re: End Drawing Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by Am on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 10:01:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Felt it very close to my heart.
Thanks for this write.
It was truely touching.
Well done. |
|
|
Re: End Drawing Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:25:09 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I found this slightly disturbing! but I think that is part of what you are trying to get across.
Very good write.
J. |
|
|
Re: End Drawing Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:43:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is intense, I like it. Leaves the reader hanging with the ending -
Avenging the death of a sister dear
Will it be her or his end drawing near?
Nice write.
~Jenny~
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
