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Illuscent Dreams
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:26:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Taking....But have I given
Lost in the irrelavant of needing
Sees I can be the honest,yet never given back
Wanting...Free will of feelings
Always the same.....Sweet and willing to make all happy
Does it ever change
Found...Yes it Can be found through certain eyes
They are the one who are so clear......Yet blinded
Seeing what was, and Scared
Needing...
Thinks all is said!
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2006-03-20 21:26:17]
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Re: Illuscent Dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by oreo_kisses on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:52:31 PM AEST
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| i like that, its good, keep up the good work |
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Re: Illuscent Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:58:00 AM AEST
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I've read and read this I've probably said this before about abstract work, but you can get so many meanings each time you read.
To me this poem is saying you need to be needed but the search goes on...
I found this an engrossing, fascinating piece of writing.
Well done Brew.
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