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Thinking
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 11:11:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Thinking of you and I'm feeling like *****
I'm crying now because I just slit my wrists
The blood is pouring but the pains still here
I'm troubled now and I really want you near
The tears are flowing steadily like water in a stream
Ive cut so deep that I can see the meat
The blades in my hand and I want to cut more
Over and over again, now I'm passed out on the floor
I see a white light and I see you are there
I'm so damn madd that I give you a glare
You start to turn away so I scream out your name
But you run from me and I burst into flames
I'm screaming even though I cant feel the flames
I'm screaming because I feel so ashamed
I wake up screaming and I'm covered in blood
I mustve been out a while because its all dried up
Then it hits me that I'm staring at myself
Just before I spend eternity burning in hell
I'm thinking of you just this one last time
And how bad I fuct up when I called you mine
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lonely_boy
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2006-03-20 23:11:58]
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Re: Thinking
(User Rating: 1 )
by GemmaLouiseRose on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 08:04:35 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed the dark imagery.. i can tell it was more thought out than the others, i prefer it when it just flows out of u.. but its still good x |
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