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DONT MAKE HER CRY
Contributed by
freespirit
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Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 10:35:18 AM in AEST
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Dont make her Cry
Dont take my little girl and tell her no lies
Dont break heart and dont make her cry
Because her mama watching youre every move
So dont even try is because I know youll lose
Ive been down the road and Ive seen it all
Heard all the promises thats ever been told
Seen all the smiles and know all the grins
And Im telling you now you just wont win
First its the drinking than the cheating sets in
And before you know it your in a tail spin
You tell her you love and your heart is true
Then youre down on you knees singing the blues
So take it from me when I say I know
Because I married one like you a long time ago
So dont take my girl and tell her no lies
Dont break her heart and dont make her cry
This mama is watching your every move
And guess what Johnny you LOOSE
Written By
Dorothy Calvert
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY
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by Keila on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:19:32 AM AEST
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| thats great i like it |
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY
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by broken__mirror on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:00:01 PM AEST
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| Wow thats so beautiful,i love it! |
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:48:32 PM AEST
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this made me smile.
"This mama is watching your every move"....
LOL!
Delightful poem. |
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:55:34 PM AEST
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| Good write, made me smile :) |
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:11:46 PM AEST
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Fantastic, Dorothy. More Mommas need to take a stand and protect their daughters from these worthless pieces of crap. Better the daughters get mad than get used and destroyed. Too many parents just don't want to get involved because the kid will get mad. It is your job to protect them and I say "hurrah" for you and parents that do care enough to step in.
Blessings and love,
Rita |
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:06:13 PM AEST
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Very good poem Dorothy but I'm not to keen on the last line!!
and guess what Johnny you LOOSE.
Come on you could have called him Bill or Dave anything but Johnny! lol!
all the best.
Johnny.
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY
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by slowlysinking on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:57:20 PM AEST
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| Very cute....I will have to remember that one in about 15 years or so when my little girl decides to bring home some dude. lol |
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 08:44:28 PM AEST
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Very good advise my friend. Being a mother with grown children I know what cha mea.
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: DONT MAKE HER CRY
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by instant_star16 on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 06:54:23 AM AEST
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| this is one of the best poems ive evr read......I wish my mom would write me something like this. Im 16 so i of course rebel and date the worst guys but my mom always looks out for my heart. And i just wanted to let you know its a wonderful poem. |
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