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The pain that hurts the most
Contributed by
Keila
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Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:17:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Close my eyes one more time
I can feel the pain now,
I am no longer numb
I can feel you as you break my heart
I know I cant keep you
But I know that I want to
Just a little pain
What is a world of trust,
Without some pain.
What is love without the loss
What is life without the sorrow
And what am I without the pain
I cannot keep you forever
Even though I will try
I cant stay alone forever
Though it hurts to say goodbye.
I feel this pain again,
And I know it cant be smart
To try again ,just to watch it fall apart.
I am sad, but I know
this pain that I wont show,
it is the pain that hurts the most.
Copyright ©
Keila
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2006-03-21 11:17:38]
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Re: The pain that hurts the most
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by Lin54 on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:27:04 AM AEST
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Good feeling poem!
Keep up the writing!
Linda |
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Re: The pain that hurts the most
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:43:32 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written. The last three lines are my favorite. I enjoyed your poem! |
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Re: The pain that hurts the most
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by Alison on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:44:01 PM AEST
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| very well say! great write. and u r not alone, i no just how u feel! |
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Re: The pain that hurts the most
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:52:38 PM AEST
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Excellent write. Well done.
J. |
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Re: The pain that hurts the most
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by whiteleo1984 on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:25:09 PM AEST
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| ncie write... ive been there and understand fully how u feel |
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Re: The pain that hurts the most
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 04:17:19 PM AEST
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This is terryfyingly good.
I like how it describes when you love a person, but you know it wouldn't work, even if you try your best, it won't last forever. |
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