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LOVE
Contributed by
maddie
on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 07:04:47 PM in AEST
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oops
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my heart is trapped in your soul
i know that your leaving
and my heart will never again be whole
the smile that you gave me
on our last day
made me wish that you were here to stay
stay with me
and share my feelings
stay with me to share our love
stay wiht me to hold me tight
and keep away all my fright
i know it's not right to get my hopes up
and pretend we'll always be together
when i know tonight's our last night forever
Copyright ©
maddie
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2006-03-21 19:04:47]
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Re: LOVE
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by boobiepeach on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 07:33:05 PM AEST
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very sad write
but good
lonley and real
great write
peach |
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Re: LOVE
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by Adelle on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:21:28 AM AEST
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| oh my gosh, i feel your pain, been through it too- but somehow you will make it- keep writing, alot- good job |
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