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Emptiness
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:07:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Welcome to my world the world of the damned welcome to my peace the screaming of thousands welcome to my home destroyed by violence welcome to my life empty inside.....
You say you can't be loved why do you think that? cause some idiots told you so? why can't you see what I see? why can't you know what I know? you want to give in and give up if you do, all that I did for you was worthless I might as well just show you the other side of me if that's the case maybe then you will understand and see if you look into that face is that what you want? is that what you seek? do you want to see why I was called heartless? do you want to see the fullness of the Black-Heart? the only thing keeping me alive is hope of a better tomorrow the only thing that keeps me from dying is the small piece of love still in my heart. and last night, my heart broke....... I'm here for you, but you don't believe that cause you've heard it a thousand times I care for you, but you don't believe that cause you've heard it a million times there's love in my heart, do you want it? is that what will keep you from giving in? if that's the case, it's yours... I'll give you whatever you need don't worry bout giving it back why should you be different from the rest? just understand this one thing you woke up the demon in me last night your tears touched my soul and I'm fighting that war again and this time I might lose.....
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Re: Emptiness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alison on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 05:50:12 PM AEST (User
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there is a lot of anger in this poem. i'm sure that whoever hurt you "last night" did not mean to...in fact that might have been the very lest thing they ever wanted to do! so plz dont let it break whatever you have left.... |
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Re: Emptiness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Concrete_Rose on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 02:13:31 PM AEST (User
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OMG, THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, I'M GOING THROUGH SUMTHING SIMILAR WITH MY B/F AT THE MOMENT, GOOD JOB |
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