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I Wish I Could
Contributed by
Alison
on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:00:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wish I could hold you,
But my broken heart wont let me,
I wish I could tell you everything will be alright,
But thats a lie I dont even believe,
I wish I could give you my heart,
But no one could put it back together,
Im sorry I pulled away,
No one has ever held me as I cried,
Im sorry I cant trust you,
Just Ive heard it all before,
Im sorry that you care,
I dont ever want to hurt you.
I wish I was whole,
To give you what you need,
I wish I could see inside you,
To know where your hurting,
I wish you could know all that I think of you,
To see that your not heartless at all.
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-03-22 18:00:56]
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Re: I Wish I Could
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by POETICALLY-INCLINED on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:06:11 PM AEST
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| I loved this. I relate to this poem more than I care to openly admit. It brought back memories. I loved it. Great Job. |
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Re: I Wish I Could
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by flyineagle on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:09:55 PM AEST
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this poem sounds like you wrote this about a boyfriend you broke up with because you couldn't trust him and now you wish you could.
I thought it was an OK piece. Keep it up. |
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Re: I Wish I Could
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by whiteleo1984 on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:50:50 PM AEST
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| i wish u could 2 |
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Re: I Wish I Could
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:50:53 PM AEST
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| This is a very relateable poem. I like your changes between how you felt and your longing to trust. |
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Re: I Wish I Could
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by instant_star16 on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 06:44:23 AM AEST
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| I really like your poem......If someone wrote me that i think i might just have to cry. |
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Re: I Wish I Could
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by Sahara on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 02:16:36 AM AEST
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This is a great write.. seems to be relateable for many of us...
i agree with the other comment if someone wrote this for me... i would cry... lol almost did just reading it.... |
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