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Untitled
Contributed by
LifE_oF_a_SuIcIdAl
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:43:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Untitled
The blood drips down on her bed
She was feeling pain, wanting to be dead
She looked around and just saw hell
Hey daddy hit her and said not to tell
She used to be happy, full of joy
But then people treated her as a toy
She thought she was better, more then dirt
She even put up with everyones ***** and hurt
No one would care when she was gone
What she was about to do, was so wrong
She pulled the trigger and felt the blast
On the floor she fell so fast
In heaven now, no cuts all clean
Up here theres love, no one is mean
In the hangs of God right now
God asked why and she said I dont know how
She went through all the pain, taunts, and laughs
In Gods eyes, I was first, and not last
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2006-03-22 18:43:45]
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Re: Untitled
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by crazy on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:31:31 PM AEST
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| i cant say how this made me feel .because i tryed it 3 times .so i love readiong this topic of poetry.this starts out sad but turns out for the best.i love the ending how you made it all happy.good write.oh.. and the title...some of the best poems have no title. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 11:50:22 PM AEST
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| Very emotional write. I hope you can find light before too long. You are not alone. There is other people who feel like you do. Keep writing |
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by broken_cookie on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 10:21:31 PM AEST
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| this is a great writre. i got shivers while reading it.lol. byes! |
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