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Circle Jerk
Contributed by
Mangos
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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An axe to grind
Against the scull
Wool over the eyes
Straw man to beat
Three sheets
To the wind
Butt heads
Train wreck
On tracks of speckled rails
Around the bush
Streams the valley
Silence in the hills
Overall assumptions
Lead to clear expectations
Great limits placed on manageable angels
The apple falls far
From the tree branch
Defensive, taken out of range
Built bridges
Burn rivers
Log jam
Gold toes
High quality
Cotton charged static grows
Tolerance builds up in large
Particles cultivate
Destroyed castle walls
The face of a framed portrait
Painted beauty
Artistic ingenuity
Videotaped excitement
Jump up and down on a bed of feathers
All about being comfortable
On soft rocks rest many heads
To many pots
Spoil the chef
Burned in return for creating a mess
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Copyright ©
Mangos
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Re: Circle Jerk
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:20:36 PM AEST
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| this was interesting, it had a good rythem and flow to it, which I liked. |
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Re: Circle Jerk
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by Sena on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:25:42 PM AEST
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| I liked it...an easy read. =) |
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Re: Circle Jerk
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by Lucy on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:18:17 PM AEST
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Wow I like this :)
Nice language!
Lucy
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