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Antibacterial Hand Sanitizer, with Aloe for Soft Skin
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:55:36 PM in AEST
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I might tell her that I love her
I may speak the words she wants to hear
I might tell her that I need her
I am the cure to her aching fears
I might hold her in my arms till the sun strikes the sheets
I may entangle her with my love and poetic speech
My legs wrapped around her bare skin
As her waist drips a bead of sweat and the slow dance begins
I might enter her world in swaying grace
I may kiss her in the most inappropriate place
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Re: Antibacterial Hand Sanitizer, with Aloe for Soft Skin
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:18:11 PM AEST
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this had a really good flow to it, I liked it alot. The last two lines are inspired!
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Re: Antibacterial Hand Sanitizer, with Aloe for Soft Skin
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by twick on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 02:22:32 AM AEST
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wow, is it hot in here or is it just me! I absolutely love the title and makes me wonder if this poem is positive or negative; one, of the persons involved or two, the act. Let me know!
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