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Flicker
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:11:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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I feel my skin burning before you
As you begin to undress
Your body, so smooth in the moonlight
Your skin tempered with frost bite
From my cold gaze upon your body
Scanning your every move
As you dance beneath a sheet of stars
I feel your breath dance along my skin
Your eyes connected with mine
Your soul, tuned into my very thoughts
Your heart resting in my palm
As you surrender your flesh to me
I am in control of you
You belong to no-one but myself
I watch you closely from my window
You seem so distant from me
I want to feel your flesh against mine
I want to devour your lips
Youre so far away, so out of reach
My arm is outstretched, closer
You are so oblivious of me
My hand, resting gently on your chest
Resting against the screen
Your body composed of bright pixels
Your mind made of binary
A sentient ethereal being
Living inside my PC
My intangible source of worship
You are not real
You never were
You will be real
Inside my mind
Where you belong
Love is not real
This is.
My
Beautiful Porn
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
... [
2006-03-22 20:11:44]
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Re: Flicker
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by crazy on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:22:45 PM AEST
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absolutely magnificent.i camnt believe it ended the way it did i thought it was something else.it was so good i read it twice.
the way it described every move the feeling in this poem is ...just amazing i love it.great to have you back.it seems like every one is coming out of some type of depression or bad time.well great job |
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Re: Flicker
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by Sena on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:38:54 PM AEST
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| All I can say is "wow." |
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Re: Flicker
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by DarkFaerie on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:34:57 PM AEST
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| Great poem, it fills you with images then snaps you back into reality. Fantastic job. : ) |
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Re: Flicker
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:37:51 PM AEST
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wow this is really creative.. I think it does make you think.. and its an interesting write on porn.. very thought provoking.. and like the others said it does snap you back into reality.. good write
JENNI |
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Re: Flicker
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 11:57:38 PM AEST
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Liked the ending b/c it isn't something i would ever think of until you got to it.
Good write |
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Re: Flicker
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:10:27 AM AEST
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Wow... yeah, wow...
Just awesome! |
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Re: Flicker
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by MissTea on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 01:53:26 PM AEST
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| OMG alec! i've always known u were such a GREAT writer...i've missed seeing ur poems...this one is amazing...u r amazing! well done!!!! |
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Re: Flicker
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by Lucy on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:20:51 PM AEST
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This is amazing! The ending is just wonderfully unexpected :D I love it.
Lucy
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