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my first love
Contributed by
maha_ak49
on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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it all started,
when i saw you,
on a small station,
i am amazed,
looking at gods sculpture,
i kept looking,
suprisingly,
you smiled,
i reacted,
later we were close,
then,
i plucked my favourite rose,
only for you,
you rejected,
claiming ,
i am an ugly piece of art,
rain poured,
laughing at me,
saying,
thats the end ,
of my first love.
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2003-01-31 06:00:00]
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Re: my first love
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:35:10 AM AEST
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| beautiful....................... |
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Re: my first love
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by Cutey on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 12:48:25 AM AEST
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| That was so very Beautiful put and that was so touching i can relate to that poem |
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Re: my first love
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by soul_je on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 09:35:15 AM AEST
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| I did not know about that.....kesian.....anyways, a wonderful poem. |
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