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Sorry about Your Duck
Contributed by
jonquilcottage
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:22:08 PM in AEST
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To two of the most wonderful friends
In your darkest hour
Sorry to hear about your pet
Things are very sour
Ducks can be such wonderful pals
Now yours has gone away
Hope you are feeling better now
And this is what i pray
Maybe you can find another
But what could i be thinking
Nothing will ever replace that one
Not even in a blinking
But not to worry your little head
About your little mate
At least he has gone to a better place
And not some dinner plate
Copyright ©
jonquilcottage
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2006-03-22 22:22:08]
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Re: Sorry about Your Duck
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by bakacaka on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:40:18 PM AEST
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i think it could be better if you would lose the constant abab form and it is a little bit insincere
because of the format but im glad that you care about your friend |
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Re: Sorry about Your Duck
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by AliB on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 04:22:41 AM AEST
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I have 3 ducks!! Mummy duck and 2 of her babies from last year. They truely are wonderful pets, so funny to watch. Warning though, don't have a fish pond!!! lmao
Good write, liked the last line, ducks are def not for eating.
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Re: Sorry about Your Duck
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by Spike on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 06:01:08 AM AEST
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dear floral house,
I think this is a sweet and poignant write, with just the right touch of humour to even out the empathy. It felt like a Hallmark card written by a vegan!
It cheered me up no end -I'm sure it will do the same to your mourning friend.
thanks for sharing, and keep posting!
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Re: Sorry about Your Duck
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by freespirit on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 11:50:03 AM AEST
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you made my smile thank you
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Re: Sorry about Your Duck
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:33:15 PM AEST
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ha! this is awesome.
i like this one
rock! ^_^ jenny |
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Re: Sorry about Your Duck
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:45:37 AM AEST
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But not to worry your little head
About your little mate
At least he has gone to a better place
And not some dinner plate
I think i'll be grinning all day over those last 4 lines!!
Well done.
J.
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Re: Sorry about Your Duck
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by snowflake on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 05:36:38 PM AEST
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NIce i love it
*~SNowFlaKE~* |
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