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Safety Pins
Contributed by
bakacaka
on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:24:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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you'll never be able to know
if you dont raise your head
and shake the world with
all you are
like its all you have
just promise me
and l'll swear to you
that l'll never take that path
and you'll never be like l became
if l become too blind to see
will you please hold me
even when l say no
shake the world with
all you are
like it's all you have
l won't let you sink too low
l'll never let you go
if everyone seems like an enemy
like no one gives a damn
just promise me
and l'll swear to you
that l'll never take that path
and you'll never be like l became
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2006-03-22 22:24:12]
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Re: Safety Pins
(User Rating: 1 )
by jonquilcottage on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:31:51 PM AEST
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| I like this one it is good |
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Re: Safety Pins
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by twick on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 02:13:01 AM AEST
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again, I like this. I think you have a unique style but I don't really even know what it is. However, it appeals to me and keeps me reading even if the message isn't direct.
I'll be waiting for that Red Bull! |
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