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Far Off Distances
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 11:32:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Far off distances of places I've never been
But I hope to in order to complete me
I stand still with hopes of being taken there
Nothing happens
Skies bluer than they should be
Clouds not as white as they could be
I'm much better off than I would be
If I was up there joining them
Spitting down on heaven's creation
Mountains are way too good for me
Here in the valley where I am meant to be
I am but human
But human is what I'll never be
Wake me when these comparisons will end
Until then I'll be dreaming in my bed
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Re: Far Off Distances
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by Alison on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 01:18:27 PM AEST
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| huh, you have some very interesting thoughts in this poem. great write! |
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Re: Far Off Distances
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by richcol7522 on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 11:23:44 PM AEST
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| You deserve to be up at a mountain peak...not down in a valley. I hope that things are really looking up for you now. |
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