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I Wish
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
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Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 06:02:42 PM in AEST
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Your words touch my soul like none other
When I'm around you I can't breathe
I can't move
I don't want to speak
cause one wrong word will drive you away
I tremble at the sound of your voice
I lose my senses when you walk next to me
I just don't know what to do anymore
I just can't take this much longer
I just wish you knew
I just wish you knew...
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2006-03-23 18:02:42]
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Re: I Wish
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 11:15:09 PM AEST
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now....how fun would things be if you knew it all?
lol, great write.
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Re: I Wish
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by Alison on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 11:59:16 PM AEST
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| its short but still has i lot of feeling in it! great write! |
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Re: I Wish
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by ilovelillbj on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 12:00:06 PM AEST
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| good write but if they're worth having one wrong word wouldn't drive them away. have faith in this person not to disappear, we're all only human! i agree with a previous comment, there is a lot of fun in not knowing! each stage, even the ones preceeding, are beautiful and exciting for such different reasons, enjoy them all xx |
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