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Still Bleu Waters
Contributed by
Davinah
on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 06:23:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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No time for elegance
You are a picture of loneliness
As you stumble in your darkness
Dragging yourself along
Oh, how those blue eyes weep
Yet without tears left to shed
The sorrow that you cannot hide
Is written in those still blue waters
Do you ever dream of me
When night has fallen over you
The touch I bring you say you love
That reaches through your emptiness
I could fill your empty spaces
Make you long for the divine
I could give you all of my passion
And cause a ripple in your still blue waters
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2006-03-24 06:23:16]
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Re: Still Bleu Waters
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 05:43:11 AM AEST
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Love is visible in between those stanzas though my poet friend could have squeezed his heart to get some more emotion into the poem yet the true effort is apparent.
FRANCO
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