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I was the grandest of the land.
Contributed by
AmandaChartrand
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Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:53:41 AM in AEST
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Holding my hands,
You told me I was the grandest lady of he land.
We rode on white horses up and down the seashore,
Until the day you were called to war.
My heart wilted like a black rose in the cold snow,
Now i see your grave stone in flanders field next to others row by row.
The sorow.
My heart is now cold,
The last words you told.
Were my finest lady i love you and i will return next year.
My beautiful lady do not shed a tear,
Have no fear.
I will always be with you here.
Copyright ©
AmandaChartrand
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2006-03-24 10:53:41]
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Re: I was the grandest of the land.
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:31:45 PM AEST
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so very sad a true story of love. Very realisitc in what is going on right now in our world today
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Re: I was the grandest of the land.
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by Vermilion on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 01:37:29 PM AEST
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A wonderful write, a tearful journey. A poem that both rips me apart and puts me back together again, from one word to the next...
Love,
Mili. x |
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Re: I was the grandest of the land.
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by ReservedHarlot on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 05:33:38 PM AEST
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| You still are the grandest of the land in my eyes. |
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Re: I was the grandest of the land.
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by AmandaChartrand on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 07:38:54 PM AEST
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| Thanx you guys for all the nice comments! I am happy you enjoyed it! |
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Re: I was the grandest of the land.
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by brew on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:20:28 PM AEST
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So sorry for your loss. Just know he is going to be ALWAYS in your heart.! He loved you and went to fight for you, and all.! That was the greatest theing he could of done.! Try and know he will hold your heart, forever,
Brew~ |
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