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Faithless
Contributed by
shade_
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Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 01:48:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Faintly float,
Drifting
Like tears..
Abruptly awoken
After,
so many years..
Innocent stranger
Deliver
my hell..
Neither here nor
There,
screaming in the cell
Then I shall,
Pray
until I die..
Left in silence,
Alone,
asking why?..
Yesterday it faintly
Floated,
.. And drifted like so many tears
As I
Recall
The faithless years
Copyright Rebekah Hoffman 2006
Copyright ©
shade_
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2006-03-24 13:48:29]
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Re: Faithless
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 11:28:50 AM AEST
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This was a really good poem.. I liked it alot... It was certainly dark..
take care
christina |
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Re: Faithless
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 09:24:16 AM AEST
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with words of simplicity and a tint of pensiveness you have molded this piece of your poem into a work of art, and a beautiful image to go with. “WONDERFUL.”
FRANCO.
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Re: Faithless
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by JGB on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 02:26:11 AM AEST
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Beautifully written.
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