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Same Old Story
Contributed by
EvaLastingRose
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Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 03:29:58 PM in AEST
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I change my mind,
I cant take it.
Fighting the day not to spend with you.
You dont solve the problem,
Because there isnt a day where I dont want to be ok.
Its best if you stay far away.
All the bridges we built together to solve my problems,
You have only made them fall.
So when my world is caving in, I wont watch it burn to the ground.
Im sick of taking the fast road.
You arent my easy way out.
Im going to let go too soon, Im going to step off,
But I have no ground.
And no one is going to stop me, because I turned the tables.
When I fall no one will hear it,
They will listen, but no one will pay attention to the last words,
They just wait until I hit my face.
Ill just lie there all alone, the way I want it.
I need to change my mind and let it all go.
Just leave it behind like I always do,
Start again, run away, it was better than my worst.
And Ill just skip the hurt,
I wont look outside the window.
Ill just run to the fast road of freedom with no passion.
Its too much to take,
Can never look back.
But I do, because I let go too soon,
So I have to look back,
The danger was better,
Maybe I undertook the tears,
And drank the fireworks to fast.
I was too greedy.
And it was such a pity,
I cant say what I want to do.
Wasted away a sea of feelings,
Dropping off the top of my world,
Falling on you.
Down,
There I go,
Dont you care where Ill be?
Because Im not home,
Im not waiting.
It would be so much better if you would only not care,
But thats too much to ask of you.
Maybe the best thing to do is my doubt,
To look back,
Before the running even happens.
When you talk its just a joke,
I cant take it any more.
But there you go, see if I care,
Ive been here before.
And as long as youre gone Ill stay here,
There is no where else to hide.
Just dont come for me.
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EvaLastingRose
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2006-03-24 15:29:58]
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Re: Same Old Story
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 02:27:24 AM AEST
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aside from some continuity/idea issues that probably only i have(i'm weird...), this was a great read.
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Re: Same Old Story
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by SugimotoYouki on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 11:08:31 PM AEST
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Well, I'm sorry, but this was a really difficult read to me...
maybe formating a few paragraphes might have made it easier to read...
Also I sometimes had a bit of trouble guessing what you're trying to say, but maybe I just didn't get it right..
What I really like about this poem, though, is your open way of speech...
it gives me as your reader a quite vivid taste of the frustration you captured within this poem...
Nice work |
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