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Daddy's little girl
Contributed by
foxfire44
on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 07:40:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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Daddy's little girl
When I was a little girl I felt so alone
I missed my daddy , wanted him home
Little did I know the reason he was gone
He was serving time over in Vietnam
As a little girl I could only seem to see
Daddy was not there, as I needed him to be
Daddy was my world when I was a little girl
He was my prince charming, my duke of earl
I learned to accept a daddy passed due
He was fighting to guard our country for me and you
He was a changed man when he returned home
He was now always there I was never alone
I am proud of my daddy for what he has done
Making this world safer for all our loved ones
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2006-03-24 19:40:53]
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Re: Daddy's little girl
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:10:36 PM AEST
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| well i can identify somewhat with this piece. i think you did an excellent job rhyming and getting the little girl tone to shine in this. your last rhyme or perhaps the line didnt flow as nicely as your others though. i dont know if the rhythm was off or if it was the rhyme. maybe you can follow in his footsteps =] |
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