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Would you...?
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:59:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I begged you
And plead 'Im sorry for the past"
Would you listen?
Would you care at all?
If I knew what I did was wrong
If I was able to face my demons
Would you have my back once more?
Would you be there to give me strength?
If I tried to get back on the right path
If I struggled to make this better
Would you go with me?
Would you be right by my side?
If I told you everything
Even what you didnt want to hear
Would you understand?
Would you realize why I did it?
If I cant do it on my own
If I fail like every other time
Would you help me through it?
Would you see me here again?
If I swore that it was over
If I promised to change my ways
Would you see me trying?
Would you give me another chance?
If I knew what life without you offered?
If I saw now what Ive always desired
Would you offer it again?
Would I ever get that back...?
And if you decided not too return
If I couldnt face another day without you
Would you know why I'd have to die?
And would you miss what we used to be?
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Re: Would you...?
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 11:37:58 PM AEST
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good write, your emotion showed very well, hope it all works out for you.
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Re: Would you...?
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by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 11:32:44 AM AEST
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| She'll always miss what you used to have, just give her time and she'll come around. Fantastic heartfelt write. Great job at showing your emotions. : ) |
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Re: Would you...?
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by brew on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:16:01 PM AEST
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If they are truly or has ever been truly in "love" with you, then it will happen. She may not see it now...or even months to come...BUT she will always feel it.! Chris, dont give up, life has all kinds of paths, and we walk many.! Just keep smiling, and know it will happen when it is suppose to.!
Brew~ |
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