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Broken and Bruised
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 12:14:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Lost and confused
Not sure what I should do
Should I follow my heart
Which screams you from the start
Should I follow my head
To the one sleeping in bed
I dont know what to do
I wish I was see-through
My heart flutters on a string
The pain is always churning
I need to decide
But it feels like a part of me died
So I sit here lost and confused
My soul broken and bruised
Not sure where to turn
And yet my heart still yearns
Copyright ©
DarkFaerie
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2006-03-25 12:14:30]
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Re: Broken and Bruised
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by slogan on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 12:39:59 PM AEST
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| Nice flow..great write...jh |
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Re: Broken and Bruised
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 02:10:17 PM AEST
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some decesions in life are so hard to make. i hope you find the strength to find your path. great write packed with emotions A++++
nice flow to this! |
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Re: Broken and Bruised
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 02:29:38 PM AEST
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wow this is a very expressive and powerful write on confusion.. I know this feeling well.. great job at putting it into words
JENNI |
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Re: Broken and Bruised
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 03:57:22 PM AEST
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| it seems like you have a tough decision to make. i hope the best for the two of you. in my experience any relationship that is easy is a relationship where the people don't care about eachother best luck |
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Re: Broken and Bruised
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 05:25:22 PM AEST
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Oh 2 be this honest in one writting, how does any one do it and with such conviction. How good it must feel. a beautiful peice of writting dispiteall the turmoil.
Ben |
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