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Dirty Mirror
Contributed by
justme03
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Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 06:10:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Flashes of what you did
come before my eyes.
Your friendship and
your sympathy
I see now were all lies.
All you wanted was one
thing from me.
All you wanted was to
take my innocence from me.
You scarred me.
You broke me
and I dont think I can look
at you again.
Now I see the demon within.
I didnt need you
never did.
It was me who was too fast to trust.
It was you who took that trust and ran.
All I needed was your friendship,
but what I got was a guilty conscience.
Always felling like it is my fault.
But its not!
And if I have to stand in front
of a dirty mirror,
smeared by all the lies you fed me
and broken by the fear you gave me;
if I must stand in front of this damm
mirror everyday and tell myself it is not
my fault, over and over again just to mend
the messed up mirror, then I will.
And it will only make me a stronger person
who will be remembered for coming through
this alive, and you will only be remembered
as a thing that got in my way.
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justme03
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2006-03-25 18:10:48]
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Re: Dirty Mirror
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by crimson_regret420 on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:01:42 PM AEST
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Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. I absolutely love it. I can tell you really felt what you wrote and I sincerely hope you will become a stronger person because of this experience.
Much love,
Crimson |
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Re: Dirty Mirror
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by TheKid on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 09:15:23 PM AEST
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| Very sincere write... you surely can express how you feel in words. |
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Re: Dirty Mirror
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by slogan on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:25:48 PM AEST
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| great write: ""Courage does conquers fear"" after all...good luck in all your future endeavors...jh |
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Re: Dirty Mirror
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by sally-heart-jack on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 02:37:25 AM AEST
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THIS IS REALLY GOOD.
REALLY.
A lot of emotion in it.
It's amazing, really good. |
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Re: Dirty Mirror
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 12:58:37 PM AEST
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This is an excellent realization for you to come to. I wish more in your position could see it this way. When you look in that mirror, it is only the mirror that is dirty, not you. He may have clouded your reflection of yourself, but reading this poem give me a sense of your strength and that you will realize this and come out on top of this with flying colors.
Blessing and warm hugs to you,
Rita |
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