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It Hurts Bad:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:51:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The sad-ness of a broken heart,
the look upon one's face.
To brake the new,what can one say?
I no longer feel the same way.
promise as been broken,
dreams won't come true.
hope as gone sailing.
what else can one do?
tears as dried-up,
no longer can one cook.
why i am closing this door with a kiss.
"please stay,stay with me to-day
I can no longer live this sweet-heart way."
Go home and have a bless day,
i' have found a better way
i'll wait on my true love goodby, ok.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2006-03-25 19:51:49]
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Re: It Hurts Bad:
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:13:17 PM AEST
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lovely write =D
~natalya |
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Re: It Hurts Bad:
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by TheKid on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:49:55 PM AEST
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| Nice write... Keep it up |
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Re: It Hurts Bad:
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by foxfire44 on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:50:58 PM AEST
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| right to the heart ...I like the way you wrote it ...very good keep up the good work |
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Re: It Hurts Bad:
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 01:55:50 AM AEST
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I hear ya, my friend.
It will get better jus hang tuff.
Keep writing. Good job.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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