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Pontius
Contributed by
dedpoet
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Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 01:52:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I sit quietly all alone
eating shards of glass
hate the way i hurt inside
but i hope it will last
take your eyes from off my face
i know what i lack
don't think i'll forget the way
you stabbed me in the back
honestly honestly
can you blame me
for what i've seen
was it my fault
i seen blood on your hands
pontius wash them clean
it wasn't your demand
as i lay me down to sleep
i pray that i wont wake
as i know the worth of souls
i pray that yours he'll take
sheep thats fallen from the flock
let me fall behind
as i go forth to be judged
will this blood he find
Father forgive them
for they know not what they do
Father forgive them
for the wrongs that they've done you
but father deny him
yet i know this cant be true
so father deny me
for the wrongs that i must do
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Re: Pontius
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by chanceof_promise on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 03:02:00 AM AEST
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i like that..
having the lines a space apart makes me want to read faster..
i like that effect.. |
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Re: Pontius
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 02:12:29 PM AEST
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such raw emotions. great write. i love the imagry when you eat the shards of glass, causing your own pain and becoming dependent on that same pain. you have an amazing talent. keep writing
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