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Scented as a natural beauty
Contributed by
inoc
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Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 07:06:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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your being caresses over my body
gently erases my tensions away
instantly I feel new and fresh
nothing matters anymore
I am with you
and you are with me
now
together
a moment in time
my skin is glowing
softly my silky hair flows
scented as a natural beauty
my lips are moist
I can feel you
taste you
nothing
is worth this moment
except to be with you
wrap yourself around me
my clothing is touching me tight
rip them off and expose me
I want all of you
just wrap around me
hurry now
it won't last
as like
all good things
there is an end
and a beginning
your power is leaving
with this I tearfully say
goodbye
this is a made-up story about a beautiful woman standing on a picturesque hillside enjoying the soft breeze [you]caress her body.......coni
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Re: Scented as a natural beauty
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 07:36:18 AM AEST
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| twist at the end was unexpected. could say the write BLEW hot and cold but in the main i liked it lol. |
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Re: Scented as a natural beauty
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by girish on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 11:49:19 AM AEST
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i like the irony cast in your poem. never say goodbye. for all good things beginning may be late but end will not be too quick.
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Re: Scented as a natural beauty
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by shelby on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 01:20:00 PM AEST
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beautiful, a delight forsure.
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Re: Scented as a natural beauty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 08:42:58 PM AEST
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my clothes have been stripped away.. power can reach me, nothing tight to keep this soft breeze from me. There was no beginning and there is no end of this natural beauty that I want touching and carressing me. Nothing matters, except for him, he gently loves me.
hugs,
RaquelLeah |
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