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Contributed by
Jen54
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Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:52:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How can I be saved
If no one knows my pain
As my cries go unheard
My soul begins to break
The screams go unanswered
Through the darkness of the night
So in these words of blood
Let you look back
And see how you have failed
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2006-03-26 17:52:59]
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Re: Saved
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by Tiffyo4 on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:55:18 PM AEST
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wow i loved it you seem to do you best thinking in the big house uh
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Re: Saved
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 06:30:52 PM AEST
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| sharp... liked this. |
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Re: Saved
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 04:06:21 AM AEST
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Aw, Jennifer, that is nice writing and sad.
*ginormous hug*
Tim
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by no_1nos_me on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:23:40 PM AEST
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| Too true. I loved your words this was great |
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Re: Saved
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 09:45:23 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really deep, I know that feeling really well. A great poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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