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In My Head
Contributed by
locosmurf
on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 12:42:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here i sit atop my bed
While a war is raging inside my hed
Some days i feel mad and days i want to cry
and others i feel i need to die
a living machine breeding hate
like a deadly sniper lying in wait
Fists clinched and grinding teeth
my smile is deciving but no telling what lies beneath
When i snap i'll beat you till your last breath
And i wont rest till i put you to death
Knowing your crazy its not easy to deal
Never understanding what you feel
wondering to yourself whats wrong and right
Always getting into ***** up fights
This is my life you're welcome to it
And i pray that you get through it.
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locosmurf
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2006-03-27 00:42:50]
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Re: In My Head
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 01:07:41 AM AEST
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I really like your poem, it has really feelings that many will be able to relate to. It is very believable, with very real human feelings.
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