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BLEEDING HEART
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:11:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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BLOOD DRIPPS DOWN MY ARM
THE RAZOR DROPPS TO MY FEET
SO I KEEP ON CUTTING
JUST TO FILL MY NEEDS
THE ROOM STARTS TO SPIN
MY EYES ARE IN A HAZE
I CUT MYSELF SO MUCH
I CAN'T REMEBER MY NAME
I START TO SEE A BRIGHT LIGHT
HEAVEN IS CALLING MY NAME
THE DEVIL IS STEALING MY SOUL
I FEEL THE BLOOD DROWING MY BRAIN
MY LIFE IS COMEING TO AN END
AND THE WORLD IS TO BLAME
Copyright ©
Tiffyo4
... [
2006-03-27 18:11:15]
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Re: BLEEDING HEART
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:10:59 PM AEST
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Cutting horizontally wont kill you.
If thats what your doing |
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Re: BLEEDING HEART
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by no_1nos_me on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:27:33 PM AEST
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| your is great and slap the ***** out of the dude who commented before me |
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Re: BLEEDING HEART
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:03:34 PM AEST
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| sorry but in my opinion the poem sucked. there is no imagery and has the depth of a puddle. my advice? don't write about things it seems as though you know nothing about. |
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Re: BLEEDING HEART
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:43:55 PM AEST
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| its a sad poem... im not a very dark person so its not my cup of tea but its pretty good and its good for one you just wrote in school when you're bored |
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Re: BLEEDING HEART
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 11:42:07 AM AEST
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This poem was okay but nothing all that special.. but i liked it
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