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What twist me inside
Contributed by
no_1nos_me
on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:19:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Madness envelops me
I realy must be losing it
Cause now my flesh will not bleed
I fear my pain is becoming hollow
The blessed blades madden me this day
For as I ran it over my flesh harder than ever before
The tears of joy I longed to see just refused to come
What is happening to us
I asked the one stairing back at me
At this point tears of sarrow began to flow
But as the tears soke my face I turn to see
The only one there is me
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2006-03-27 19:19:22]
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Re: What twist me inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 09:56:29 PM AEST
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creeeeeepy. liked it though.
~natalya
PS: it's spelled 'soak' not 'soke' |
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Re: What twist me inside
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 11:06:12 PM AEST
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| i dont usually like poems on this subject... but this one was really good cuz it sounds really true and really shows a lot of feeling in a short poem... i really liked it |
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