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Cast A Coin
Contributed by
SpellofNature
on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:21:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Chained, hanging, food for the vulture Gods The last of a dying breed, we vow This may be the final stand in an epic tragedy A romantic murder tale that is no mystery
So many coins were cast in our history Faces glinted in pools of hope But those who gazed at us as guides They were in fact our mortal enemies
The polar star acts as a celestial guide A guardian angel to show the way home
The worst pain was A child gazed to us Wished us damnation He dreamed of our end
We cast no crime Cause no tear, no pain
We paint the histories of man in constellations Shining the good of the past and future
But that boy grew, he became more wise We cast our tears down in cascading stars Frozen in space, we are unable to defend It is cold here, hatred is a lonely thing to feel
We allowed man to send his minions to swim in our seas To explore our vast realms, to feast on our beauty But man will take for granted what he holds before him And so the boy became a man
Humankind aged and became more advanced The boy, now a man became old and wiser He lit the skies with a flame like a phoenix Torched every wish ever made by a child
And now, the skies, they are dark Haunting figures roam our seas Ghosts of the stars We feast on man in revenge of his deeds
Burn in hell for what you have done By setting the stars ablaze You rain the heavens in corpses Setting a rage in the Gods like that of a thousand phoenix's
The boy became a man The man became wise The man plucked from the skies Tortured his very wish
Mankind will cause the very flame That will burn him into oblivion
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SpellofNature
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2006-03-27 19:21:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cast A Coin
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jyssvw on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 08:36:43 PM AEST (User
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i like this alot,
nice job |
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Re: Cast A Coin
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:28:34 PM AEST (User
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incredible write. So detailed and true to life.
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Re: Cast A Coin
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 10:15:03 PM AEST (User
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Something differ yet, so vivid. Extradinary, write....Images that cleary set the mood for the reader. Liked this....
Brew~
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Re: Cast A Coin
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:28:50 AM AEST (User
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Great imagry! This is a great, but sad write.. |
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