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CANT GET TO THE OTHER SIDE TILL I SAY GOODBYE
Contributed by
Adelle
on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 12:49:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Driving down the road the music ringing loud pushing the pedal hard- all alone in my car- its my new cd- excitedly im listening song one, quickly brings my attention and by song two- me its completely consumed- let the past go- the words did echo give the wheel to God quit trying to control your plot break down, go ahead your tears out, you can let- its safe- this chance you must take- youve been strong in every day trying to move on but what you do not know is that your still not letting the past go- the man with a grave stone smile dead, yet it lingers still all the while- let him go, hes gone nothing but a memory, a head stone- driving down the road like showers, my tears fall with my foot on the pedal I accelerate, push and go- trying to release his memory courageously and bravely cant get to the other side until I say good bye were the words to the song that started this moment I did not even want fine, Ill let him go- as I pass the building that brought a memory somehow- ah, it was the hotel- the place where I alone did go- with his letter in my hand his words of love, I read- I thought he was the one to heal my heart instead, he lied, in what I thought we were I thought he was going to be mine forever ok, I said good bye to the memory so faded- blowing a kiss- the memory I try to release- it came and went so fast faded in the breeze its like it almost didnt even happen- gone, with the wind- that scares me, I dont want to forget those precious nights together we slept- holding each other so tight- and the way we danced and kissed I dont want to release his kiss I still hold on my lips- ah, the truth I finally release- but I will be brave and strong trust that I can go on- if I must I will let him go- I can do this, I know going home, to the life I still hold- put my children to sleep, their love, I tightly hold- ok, got it, got the message- must go on, must give my life to Jesus must say good bye to my past- so I can embrace the life I still have- must put my foot on the pedal- accelerate and go cant look back, leave the wind in the past- let Jesus guide me where to go- give him my control- serenity blows through me I am feeling amazing I can do this- getting to the other side of this starts with good bye and letting go of my past life- and embrace now and tomorrow and live my life every today and tomorrow- embrace the gifts learn, grow, overcome, accomplish much, live- shanna march 27 2006
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Re: CANT GET TO THE OTHER SIDE TILL I SAY GOODBYE
(User Rating: 1 ) by spider on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 06:56:09 AM AEST (User
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now i dont know which is my favourite :P
just reading this changed my breathing, the way its all put together is really good. the way you feel like the poem? i think thats what i mean. it makes you feel like you are the poem, rather than someone reading the poem? i dont know if i make sense :P
either way, this is a great write. |
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