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Falling
Contributed by
baby_bee
on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Falling
Deeper and deeper
Away from light
Into dark
Falling
Further and further
Away from you
Into me
Falling
Harder and harder
Away from me
Into nothing
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baby_bee
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2003-01-31 21:00:00]
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Re: Falling
(User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 01:15:52 PM AEST
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nice write! I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Falling
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 06:19:12 PM AEST
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Dear Baby_Bee, You say alot in a few words.
Very effective. I like it. Bizzy |
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